Bravo Mike, the 1st version of the monologue was spot on. Its exactly what people who feel it is too ‘hard’ need to hear. No sugar coating. The world is not a place of only rainbows and lolly pops. If indeed you get pushback for it know that there are people that appreciate the harder tone. Thank you for sharing that version and please keep up the magnificent work.
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